Shanze, by "instruments", do you mean the guitars? Understandable since they're very distorted, but come on man! Also, the drums are just one consistent rhythm that drives all the way through, and it isn't that hard to overlook. Otherwise, listen with headphones. They aren't that
incoherent, are they?
Dude, the song was good, I liked the vocal harmonies and shit but I think the problem is that the instruments don't really get their turn, the vox are on all the time. I don't mean that every song should always have a guitar solo etc. but this one would've benefited from something more different between verses or something.
boxcar wrote:Grither supplied 2 songs and I really struggled with which one to put on the compilation. Did you hear the other one on the bonus track Shanze? Also, you skipped your own review. It would be cool to hear your own view on your song.
I listened to it now and I like the bonus song a lot more! Actually this one is fucking great! Ok... I'll review my song
Faggot Sapiens - I Can't
The song was good but cut back the whining, will ya? The structure of the vocal parts was good but could you please sing about something else than "today I took a shower"? You're going a bit too far with trying to find something everybody could relate to! The chorus could've used more oomph on the guitars.
Amplified wrote:Geeeeeeeeeeez that's pretty harsh man. My singing isn't great and it gets a little off time but tear my heart out why don't ya. Covering songs isn't about adding to a song, it's about making it your own.
You didn't even make it your own, you just made it terrible! I'm sure you can make some good tracks, this wasn't one of them. Isn't the point of criticism to give your honest opinion? Would rather hear me say "Good job!" even when I didn't like it?
A master of blöjäri.